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AJ Saur

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Still Life with Closed Shutters

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After Raoul Dufy, 1906

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Still Life with Closed ShuttersAJ Saur
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Meerschaum Pipe

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After William Michael Harnett, 1886

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\A/ lesser god

is struggling

to angle

 

fire

from sea—/primordial\

cauldron out of which

 

he seeks to ladle

\Aphrodite/. But she’s elusive

as smoke,

 

mouth-/held\

for a moment

then gone

 

\in/ puffs, dissipating

clouds. He’s forgotten

seashells. Forgotten

 

clay. Forgotten foam

and mist. /Forgotten\

her wisps of hair wind-

 

swept to cover

the arriving day.

Now, he’s \darkness—/

 

/night’s\ woodgrain

splintered

and pierced by ill-

 

\fated/ striving—

trying to string

a constellation, orientate

 

his /bearing\ to avoid

the tip and knocking out

as ash, the acute

 

of the \missed./

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Meerschaum PipeAJ Saur
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AJ Saur is the author of five books of poetry from Murmuration Press, including, most recently, “Of Bone and Pinion” (2022). AJ’s poems have also appeared in Abandoned Mine, Front Range Review, Glimpse, The Midwest Quarterly, Muse, Third Wednesday, Willow Review, and other journals.

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